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Post by siuyiu on Jun 10, 2014 6:38:26 GMT
Midday. A hidden niche beneath the cliffs. A pool. Clear waters. Its depths like the deepest recesses of a woman's soul: unfathomable. A man emerges. He has traversed years of grief. And cannot drown. He sees a wooden house near the banks. He announces his presence to the silence. The silence does not answer, cannot answer, for Silence has no voice, has never had a voice, or perhaps it once did but lost it to Time, like a woman's virginity. He knocks. He enters. He is in shock. Memories awash. Like the tide, he is brought back to an earlier time, a different life. Nostalgia. He explores. A table, some chairs. A bed. A basket of mending. Everything in its proper place. There is no dust. He weeps. A hand, a white, gentle, elegant hand. Caressing his greyed head. Oh, the dreams he's had of that delicate hand! He stares at the owner of the hand. Eyes meet and hold. Bodies allow no distance between them. Time pauses in its measured steps. What is love, it asks the universe. That which surpasses life and death. (ok, you can stop laughing! yes, this is totally a satire. but hope you don't mind me having some fun.  )
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Post by Admin on Jun 10, 2014 13:50:07 GMT
LOL!! I indeed have some fun. But I really like it. I kinda agree that's Gu Long's style. Lol!! Please continue it  I don't mind with unrated scenes. We're all above 21 y.o. Or perhaps you can put PG 17? LOL
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Post by siuyiu on Jun 10, 2014 15:31:14 GMT
glad you liked! doubt i'll write more--GL is hard to emanate! 
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Post by chefying on Jun 10, 2014 16:05:27 GMT
It is beautiful, definitely very Gu Long. Well done!
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Post by siuyiu on Jun 10, 2014 16:31:02 GMT
awww, thanks, chef!
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Post by caiyi on Jun 12, 2014 6:45:46 GMT
Hahahahahahahaha....  . Your emulation of Gu Long is perfect. Gu Long would have been so proud of you.
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Post by siuyiu on Jun 12, 2014 17:45:09 GMT
 thanks, kidd!
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Post by Admin on Jun 13, 2014 12:29:15 GMT
we want more please
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