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Post by reinafu on Oct 8, 2014 20:05:41 GMT
Liang Siuyu suddenly said : " If they search carefully, they'll find us in this room for sure, we must hide elsewhere ! " Liu Han Wei cogitated a few seconds and answered : " The only hideout which comes to my mind is the roof, hoping that they won't look there... " She agreed and they immediately jumped on the roof and layed donw on the roof. Just a few seconds after they hid there, they saw several men jumping over the wall and then, an unbelievable spectacle was offered to their sight. As soon as the men put a feet in the courtyard, a gigantic figure wearing white clothes appeared from nowhere and the men were so frightened that they just fell on the ground without any word. Two other men who were about to jump in the courtyard too hid their eyes and ran away, shouting " A monster, there's a monster !! ". Without trying to know the truth, their companions ran away too. The figure laughed loudly and suddenly stopped, turning her face towards the house. As if she had known that someone was on the roof, she looked up and Siuyu hanged onto Han Wei's arm and hid her face on the roof, imitated by the young man, when she saw the figure's face. It was so horrible, with big violet pimples on the cheeks, the mouth which couldn't be closed because of two long teeth such as the vampires' teeth, and an eye much more bigger than the other one, that they both understood why people who had seen the creature were so frightened. The creature stayed in this position a few seconds, and then laughed again, before taking the direction of an outhouse in the park. Siuyu and Han Wei looked again and they had the surprise to discover that actually, the creature was made of two persons walking on stilts and Siuyu noticed that one of them was a limping man while the other one seemed to be a woman and she said : " Han Wei, this limping man looks a lot like the musician of the lakeside ! But I wonder who is the other one..." " If it's him, we should have a talk with him in order to know why he wanted to kill my father ! " " No, Han Wei, I'm too afraid, they could kill you ! " " Let's wait a moment and then, we'll examine these dead men. It's true that the " monster " is frightening, but I don't uunderstand how come they dies from fear just by seing him. There must be another explanation for their death...". They spent a long hour on the roof and when they thought that the couple they had seen wouldn't appear again, they jumped in the courtyard, worrying about the fact that perhaps the action of walking in the courtyard may provoke the appearance of the monster again. However, as their weightlessness tehcnique was very good, if there was a mecanism triggering the monster, it didn't work and they were able to examine the dead men without any problem. They didn't notice anything at first glance, but Han Wei suddenly whispered : " Look at this man, Siuyu, it seems that he has dribbled..." " Could it be that the monster has thrown a kind of poison or gas that we didn't see ? " He examined the other man, and the other bodies too, and answered " It seems that they all dribbled...Maybe you're right, Siuyu, and if it's the case, this couple must be experts in poisons and in martial arts too, since we didn't notice anything when they appeared in the courtyard..." " Let's go immediately, Han Wei, they are too strong for us." A voice in their back pined them down : " Who are you and what are you doing in the Cai family's house ?!! " They turned on a dime and discovered a masked man brandishing two long swords. When he saw Siuyu's face, he suddenly staggered and, putting down his swords, he whispered : " Get away quickly, you musn't be seen here ! " Han wei opened his mouth in order to ask something, but he pushed them and repeated : " Go quickly, don't stay here, it's too dangerous for you !! " . Han Wei took Siuyu's hand and they jumped over the wall and ran away.
They stopped only after twenty minutes of running and they fell under a tree, trying to recover their breath. Han Wei said : " That's strange... How come this man changed his mind as soon as he saw our faces ? Do you think it's someone we know ? " Siuyu kept silence for a few seconds, and finally answered : "Han Wei, I'm quite sure that this man is the musician of the lakeside. As he didn't walk, I can't be totally affirmative, but I recognized his voice. It's the man who asked me for Master Liu's head ! " " So, he might be a Cai family's member...But my family doesn't know any Cai family, so, why would he be our enemy ? The more we cross hardships, the more I think that our family's servants hid a lot of things from me and I'm totally convinced that we have to return there." They rest for a little while, and then they get up and took the direction of the Liu's village...
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Post by reinafu on Oct 8, 2014 20:32:08 GMT
After Liu Han Wei and Liang Siuyu left him alone, the man removed his mask and wiped his eyes, thinking : " How come Siuyu was here ? And who is this young man with her ?...Hum, that's a luck that it's me who found them instead of her ; she mustn't know that somebody was here...Fortunately, the gas didn't strike them. I wouldn't have forgiven myself if something had happened to Siuyu !! " He took his swords and limped towards the outhouse, worrying about Siuyu...
In the cave where are Reinafu and Ding Hua Fei
Ding Hua Fei was asleep when he suddenly heard Reinafu complaining. He immediately opened his eyes and he trembled when he saw that she was simultaneously sweating and shivering and when he touched her forehead, he began to worry about her health because she was scorching. He carefully shaked her and called her : " Reinafu ? Reinafu ? What's the matter ? " As she didn't answer, he was more anxious and thought : " She gets worse, I absolutely must find a doctor to cure her !" He cogitated for a few seconds, and finally took her in his arms and cautiously got out of the cave. It was twilight and he ran as fast as he could with his precious burden with only one thought in mind : to save Reinafu at all costs. He finally reached the town and asked an old woman who was returning at home where he could find the doctor. She showed him the doctor's house and he knocked on the door. An old man opened the door and he exclaimed : " Doctor, please, help me to save my friend. She has been assaulted and she got worse since a few minutes !" The doctor lead him to a room and he put Reinafu on the bed, and then he asked Hua Fei to leave him alone with the patient. A young maid came and asked Hua Fei to follow her in another room, where she served him some tea. Hua Fei was so nervous that he couldn't drink anything and he strided across the room, watching out for the doctor. This latter finally joined him and he asked him anxiously:"How is she, doctor ? Will you be able to save her ? " " I don't hide you that she has been very badly hurt and it will take a while for her to recover from her wounds. " " But will she live, Doctor ? " " If there is no problem during the next day and night, she will survive, young man, don't worry. " " Can I see her ? " " Who is she for you ?" Hua Fei spontaenously answered : "She's my wife " " Then, you can stay with her in the room. You seem to have walked for a long while. Did you ate something ? " "No, I didn't." " My maid will bring you something to eat in a while, then. If something happens to your wife, don't hesitate to call me. " Ding Hau Fei thanked him and he went to Reinafu's room. He sat near the bed and took one of her hands into his, whispering : " Don't leave me, Reinafu, you must live, I beg you !! " and he was so tired that he finally fall asleep...
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Post by siuyiu on Oct 9, 2014 4:02:22 GMT
this is getting complicated... i'm starting to lose the thread! reinafu could i ask a favour? when you're writing dialogue, can you put each person's dialogue as a separate paragraph? i think part of my confusion is that i very soon can't tell who's saying what. merci beaucoup!
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Post by reinafu on Oct 9, 2014 8:52:58 GMT
Sorry, I was so focused on what I wrote that I didn't thought of the paragraphs. I'll do it next time...
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Post by siuyiu on Oct 9, 2014 15:59:14 GMT
thank you, reinafu! by all means, focus on writing out your story first! but after you've written the section for posting, if you could just spend a few minutes reorganizing it so it's a bit easier to read--greatly appreciated! 
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Post by reinafu on Oct 17, 2014 21:12:16 GMT
In Cai family's house basement
The old man was praying in front of an altar where there were several funeral tablets when he heard a small noise behind him. He look behind him and discovered a man who was crawling on the ground with difficulties. He ran towards him and helped him to get up and when he saw his face, he exclaimed :
" Young master !! It's you !! It's really you !! I can't believe it !! "
Chef Ying took his arm and whispered : " Help...Help me, Old Lao... I've been wounded by an axe and I lost a lot of blood..."
Old Lao lead him to a bed made with straw in a corner and answered : " Don't worry, Young Master, I'll take care of you. "
He helped him to lay down on the bed and he tore his clothes, hiding a jolt when he discovered how bad the wound looked like. He hurried to clean it and to bandage it and then, he brought some food and water for Chef Ying. This one ate just one or two mouthfuls and drank some water, and then, totally exhausted, he layed again on the bed and closed his eyes, asking with a weak voice : " Where is my mother ? "
Old Lao hesitated a few seconds, and then answered : " I'm afraid she didn't recover her mind...She has gone again with her disguise and other men are dead once again..."
Chef Ying shook his head, saying : " Since my dad's disappearance, she has become mad and I wonder what or who could help her to recover her mind. And I don't understand why she still tries to terrify people to death...When she'll be back, bring her here, I want to talk to her. "
Old Lao noded in agreement and he returned to the altar, while Chef Ying fell asleep...
In the outhouse of the Cai family's house
The limping man looked at the woman who had taken out her disguise and shook his head, saying : " I don't understand why you still use this disguise, Wei Liang, why do you kill these innocent people ? "
Wei Liang had a cynic laugh : " Innocent ? How innocent are they ? Do you forget that they come here only to rob our family's treasures ? I won't let anyone steal all what belonged to my dear husband, and you'll help me to get rid of them until he returns home !! "
" I can't do that anymore, Wei Liang ! Did you forget that I'm also trying to reunite my family ? I can't believe that I'm helping you to kill people ! You must have turned completely mad to do such things ! And what's the use of this gas you use ? "
Wei Liang : " I'm trying to make the perfect gas which will help me to kill all your enemies and force them to tell me where is my husband. I still haven't succeed in my searches and these people are my guinea pigs !"
Once again, her interlocutor shook his head and said : " So many dead...Do you think that my brother-in-law would be happy to know that you became a cold-blooded killer ? And your son, did you think of him ? "
" My son ? Chef Ying has disappeared for so many years, now, I don't even know if he is still alive !! "
" Why don't you look for him, instead of killing people ? "
" Stop bothering me, brother, I'm working on my chemical formulas !! Get away, I need to be alone ! "
Wei Liang's brother look at his sister with a desperate look and he left the outhouse, walking towards the main building of Cai family's house. When he penetrated in it, his eyes were attracted by drops of blood on the ground and he thought:
" How come there is blood here ? Neither Siuyu neither the guy who was with her seemed to be badly hurt, so, it means that there was a third person here...And perhaps he or she is still here...Let's see where these drops of blood will lead me..."
He followed the traces of blood and arrived in front of the wall where there was the secret entry onf the tunnel. He looked carefully at it, thinking : " If I remember well, the mechanism should be somwhere on this part of the wall..." He tried several places and finally, the passage opened and he carefully penetrated in the tunnel.
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Post by reinafu on Oct 19, 2014 11:13:29 GMT
When he arrived in the room where Chef Ying had fallen asleep, Old Lao had gone out in order to buy some medicine for his young master and he frowned when he saw the laying down figure. He came closer and let escape an exclamation when he recognized the wounded man :
" Chef Ying, it's you !! "
Chef Ying opened his eyes and exclaimed : " Andrea !! My favourite uncle !! "
He tooks his uncle's hands in his own hands and asked with emotion :
" Uncle ! It's been so long since we didn't see each other !! How come you're here ?!! "
Andrea : " I met your mother a few weeks ago and she lead me to help her in her searches and... "
He stopped talking, wondering if he should go on or not, and it's Chef Ying who sighed :
" Don't worry, Uncle, Old Lao told me that she became mad and that she kills people...Which searches are you talking about ? Is she looking for me or for my Dad ? "
Andrea : " If only it was so simple !!! She has decided to look for the murderers of a part of your family and she wants to kill them with a lethal gas she is trying to make by herself and all the ones who introduce in the courtyard are killed by the gas . As she disguise as a monster and uses me - or, I guess, someone else before I met her- in order to help her to make the monster more frightening, everybody who don't look carefully to the corpses might believe that they are dead because they were scared, but actually, it's the gas which kill them...I tried to stop her, but I don't know how..."
Chef Ying : " Maybe you could lead her here. If she discovers that I'm still alive, maybe it could stop her madness... "
The two men kept silent for a while, and suddenly, Chef Ying declared :
" I have great news for you, Uncle Andrea !! "
Andrea : " What news ? Did you find my wife and my daughter ?! "
Chef Ying : " I found Siuyu !! "
Andrea sighed : " I too have found Siuyu ... At least, I have convinced myself that the girl I met is Siuyu, because she looks like my dear wife a lot..."
Chef Ying : " I don't know if we are talking of the same girl, Uncle, but I'm absolutely sure that the girl I found is really Liang Siuyu !! "
With bright eyes, Andrea greedily asked : " How can you be so sure that it's her, Chef Ying ? Tell me, please, I'm so eager to reunite my family !! "
Chef Ying : " I saw the jade bracelet on her right ankle. It's exactly the same as mine, so, I'm sure that it's her ! "
With tears in his eyes, Andrea said : " Siuyu ! My beloved daughter !! Can you describe her, please ? "
Chef Ying began to describe Siuyu and the more he talked, the more Andrea's heart beat faster and he finally exclaimed :
" That's her ! It's the same girl I met ! And she was here a few hours ago !! I was so afraid that she could die due to the gas, that I asked her and the young man who was with her to go away as quick as possible !! "
As his nephew suddenly seemed to be angry, Andrea asked :
" What happens, Chef Ying, why are you suddenly so somber ? Do you know who this guy is ? "
Chef Ying : " I talked to Siuyu about our marriage and she refused to listen to me and to come with me. She is in love with this guy and they would have escaped to me if we hadn't been attacked by a group of masked man. This guy is called Liu Han Wei "
Andrea exclaimed : " Liu Han Wei !! Liu Si Hua's son !! "
" Are you sure that it's Liu Si Hua's son, uncle ? "
Andrea : " When I saw him a bit earlier, he looked familiar to me, but I couldn't find who his face was reminding to me, but now that I know who he is, I'm quite sure that he is Liu Si Hua's son !! I can't understand how come they are in love !! Unless Siuyu didn't tell him the truth... "
Chef Ying " Which truth are you talking about, uncle ? "
Andrea : " A few months ago, a masked figure who I didn't know made me discover something wrong about Liu Si Hua and ordered me to kill him. As I still haven't fully recovered my martial arts, I decided to use someone to kill him in my name and that's at that moment that I met Siuyu. As I wanted to test her loyalty and courage and wanted to be sure that she was my daughter, I asked her to bring me Liu Si Hua's head against the promise that I would help her to find her real family and she did it...That's why I wonder how come she and Si Hua's son are in love..."
Chef Ying : " Maybe she didn't tell him...The only thing I'm sure is that they really love each other and that it will be difficult to separate them. "
Andrea scrutinized his nephew and asked : " Do you love my daughter, Chef Ying ? "
Chef Ying seemed surprised by the question and answered with hesitation : " Well...I don't know if it's love yet, but I'm attracted by her..."
Once again, they kept silence for a while, and suddenly Chef Ying said :
" There's something else you should be aware of, Uncle. "
Andrea : " What is it, Chef Ying ? "
" I met a girl who is called Andrea just as you. She plays erhu, just as you and, though she claims that she doesn't know martial arts, I'm quite sure that she is an expert. We had a musical fight and I almost lose all my power. And later, she played the Confession song of Mount Kunlun on a zither, and I almost disclosed my real identity and my purposes to her. I had to strongly struggle with my flute in order to escape the song. And one more thing, I hurt her with one of my tiny darts, and she didn't even react. She is strong, Uncle, really strong, and I wonder who she is, and why she uses you name..."
Andrea frowned and whispered : " I never heard of such a girl in jianghu...I wonder who she is too..."
Chef Ying : " She pretends that her master is Galvatron, but I never heard of this man either..."
" Well, we'll have to investigate this when you'll be better. I'm goign to fetch your mother, maybe you'll succeed in reasoning with her. "
The two men exchanged a smile and Andrea left his nephew...
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Post by siuyiu on Oct 19, 2014 20:34:10 GMT
o.O two andreas!
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Post by reinafu on Oct 25, 2014 17:42:02 GMT
On the road to the Liu's house
Liu Han Wei was about to turn left on the road when Liang Siuyu took his arm and said :
" Han Wei, do you remember what I told you when we first arrived here after you discovered that the head wasn't your father's head ? "
Han Wei : " Yes, I perfectly remember that you told me that you had been told to take the right road to go to the Liu's house, and not the left road. "
Siuyu : " So, don't you think that before going to your house and question your servants, we'd better go to the Liu's house I know in order to investigate ? "
Han Wei cogitated a few seconds and answered :
" You're right, I should have thought of this by myself !! Let's go there and see what's going on. "
She smiled and they took the right road to the fake Liu's house.
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Post by reinafu on Oct 25, 2014 21:22:10 GMT
When they arrived, Liu Han Wei looked at the house and whispered :
" That's incredible, it seems that this house and mine are twin houses ! Let's go inside..."
Siuyu followed him and they were stopped by two servants who exclaimed :
" Who are you ? What are you doing here ? "
With a self-assured tone, Han Wei answered :
" What an impudence !! How dare you talk to me this way !! I'm the young master of this house, don't you recognize me?!!"
The two servants exchanged a panicky look and they rushed into the house, followed by the couple. While one of them invited them to be seated, the other one ran to one of the rooms and a few seconds later, an old woman came in the room where they were. Liu Han Wei was looking at some pictures on the wall thinking : " We have exactly the same ones at home!! What is the meaning of all this ? " when he heard her and he turned towards her.
When she saw him, she opened wide her eyes, put her hands on her mouth and fainted. The servants exclaimed :
" Mistress !! What happens ? Mistress, Mistress !!"
Han Wei and Siuyu joined them and they helped her to sit on a large chair and Han Wei made her breathe a little flask. She opened her eyes and, touching his face with a shaking hand, she whispered :
" That's impossible ! Si Hua, it's really you ? ! "
Han Wei : " You're are mistaken, Madam. I'm not Liu Si Hua, I'm his son, Liu Han Wei."
The old woman looked at him more carefully and suddenly she exploded in tears.
Han Wei looked at Siuyu and they exchanged an inquiring look, wondering what to do.
Finally, the old woman stopped crying, holding Han Wei's hands in her own hands, and he asked her :
" Could you explain me why your house is called Liu's house and why it looks like the twin sister of my house, please ? And what do you have to do with my father ? Do you know him ? "
" I don't understand why you ask these questions ! There is no other Liu's house around here and I'm Liu Si Hua's wife, so, how can you pretend that you are his son ?!! "
Han Wei : " You contradict yourself, Madam ! You tell me that you're my father's wife and that I'm not his son, but just a few seconds ago, you thought that I was my father, so, what happens, here ?!!"
While they were talking, Liang Siuyu suddenly noticed a little girl who was spying behind a pillar and she saw that she had a jade pendant hanging on her belt, and that there was a name written on it. As nobody was paying attention at her, Siuyu joined the little girl, who run in the courtyard, but she caught her and said with a smile :
" Hello, little girl. What's your name ? "
As the girl didn't answer and was sulking, she took the jade pendant in her hand and told the girl :
" What a superb jade pendant you have ! Let me see...Yes, there's a name on it : Ding...Is it your name, little girl ? "
" It's my family name ! My name is Xiao Hua ! And you, what's your name ? "
"I'm Liang Siuyu...Who are you for this old woman you were spying a few seconds ago, Xiao Hua ? "
Xiao Hua : " It's my granny. "
" So, your granny isn't Madam Liu, right ? "
Xiao Hua shook her head and escaped, saying : " Don't tell her that I told you the truth ! You shouldn't have seen the pendant !! "
Siuyu let her go and returned in the room where Han Wei was still trying to know the truth. She came near him and told him what she had learnt in his ear.
He then exclaimed :
" That's enough, Madam Ding ! Don't pretend anymore ! I know that you're not my father's wife, so, you should tell me the truth if you want to avoid going to prison ! I can assure you that I won't hesitate to lead you to the yamen and ask the Judge to torture you in order to know the truth ! "
Once again, Xiao Hua's grand-mother cried, and she finally confessed :
" I met you father when I was 16 years old. We fell for each other, but his parents had already decided to marry him to another girlfrom a rich and powerful family and he was too eager of power and money to struggle for our own love, so, he abandoned me. When he discovered that I was pregnant, he sent killers to kill me and the baby, but I succeeded in escaping them and I took refuge in a temple, where I gave birth to my son Ding Lei. Later, when my son was only 4 years old, your father found us and he apologized to me and offered me this house, where we lived for years without seeing him anymore.
A few months ago, he suddenly appeared and asked us for help. He told us that he had a few problems with a friend of his and that he needed my son to impersonate him for a few months. As Ding Lei's face wasn't too identical to your father's one, your father forced him to wear a skin mask and promised us that the trickery wouldn't last for too long, just the time for your father to clear his name in front of his friend.
Since then, it's been six years already, my son hasn't come back yet, but I learnt that actually, your father was using him as a bandit in order to rob people and get more money and treasures. I tried to send men in order to find my son, but they failed and I'm worrying about him. A few weeks ago, my grand-son Hua Fei returned home after his examinations and he decided to look for his father...Do you know where is my son ?"
Liu Han Wei exchanged a look with Siuyu and he answered with an hesitating tone :
" Well...I'm afraid that the news aren't very good for you, Madam..."
"What...What do you mean ? WHat happened to my son ? "
" He has been killed a few weeks ago...The person would killed him was convinced that she was killing my father and she was ordered to do that by a musician called Andrea...Do you know such a musician and do you know if your son had enemies?"
The old woman cried and shout : " That's impossible ! My dear son Lei can't be dead ! Who killed him ? ! Why ? I don't know any Andrea nor any musician and my son was an honest guy before your father forces him to rob ! It's your father's fault if my son is dead ! I must kill you ! Servants, kill him, kill them both ! "
A dozen of servants ran into the room and they attacked Han Wei and Siuyu. The couple just stopped their attacks without kicking and they escaped, running as far as they could and the servants finally gave up the pursuit.
Totally devastated by what he had just learnt about his father, Liu Han Wei heavily sat under a tree and, hiding his face in his hands, he whispered :
" I can't believe it ! I can't believe that my father was such a Machiavellian man !! Using his own son to rob people and to impersonate him in order to save his own life !! That's not the father I always knew when I was a child and a teenager ! That's impossible that he could do such bad things ! I can't believe it !! "
Liang Siuyu sat near him and said :
" She seemed to be sincere and her pain when she learnt her son's death wasn't a fake one, Han Wei...I wonder what is the meaning of all that...When we first met, you told me that your father was my father's best man and that my father trusted him so much that he had asked him to protect his wife and his daughters when they were attacked...Do you think that it was in order to clear his name in front of my father that he asked Ding Lei to impersonate him ? Does it mean that my father is still alive and wants to get revenge on your father ? "
She suddenly hid her face on his shoulder and cried :
" If our families bear a grudge against each other, that means that we won't be able to live together and I won't be able to bear that, Han Wei !! I don't want to be split up with you ! "
He hug her and whispered :
" I won't let this happen, Siuyu ! Even if our fathers are enemies, I won't let you go, I love you too much to accept this ! "
She suddenly thought of the jade bracelet on her anckle and she showed it to him and exclaimed :
" Help me to get rid of this, Han Wei, I don't want to be Chef Ying's wife !! "
They tried to take off the bracelet in vain and he decided :
" Let's go home, we'll ask our blacksmith to cut it, hence, you'll be free..."
She agreed and they took the direction of the real Liu's house...
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Post by siuyiu on Oct 25, 2014 22:36:37 GMT
reinafu i really appreciate the spacing between paragraphs--much easier to read! of course, i still have a headache from your complicated plot.  and my, aren't the young people behaving scandalously--all this physical contact and being alone without a chaperone and all that! 
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Post by reinafu on Oct 26, 2014 13:10:24 GMT
It seems to me that all the Chinese series/movies I watched until now had also as complicated plot as mine...And I don't even talk about Jin Yong's Condor Heroes (I only finished the first part...)or Gu Long's Chu Liu Xiang...
Scandalous ? They didn't even kiss (unless I forgot what I wrote previously ; sometimes, I have to read again what was written in order to avoid mistakes) !! And in the series I watched, there are also young couples reunited by fate and who travel alone and finally fall in love too...Of course, I'm not very familiar with the uses in China at that time, which explains what I wrote...
You should prepare some aspirins, because more twists are to come in the plot (big smiles...I don't know how to use the smileys in this forum, sorry.) !!!
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Post by reinafu on Oct 26, 2014 18:54:47 GMT
In the doctor's house, two days after the arrival of Reinafu and Ding Hua Fei
When Reinafu opened her eyes, she discovered Ding Hua Fei asleep on a chair near her bed, while the doctor's maid was bringing some medicine for her. The maid smiled and, showing the young man with her head, she whispered :
" You're lucky to have such a loving husband, Miss, he didn't get oout of this room since he brought you here in order that my master cure your wounds. "
Reinafy repeated with surprise :
" My husband ? "
The maid : " Do you mean that this man isn't your husband ? "
Reinafu thought : " If I say no, it will bring troubles to both of su, so, let's play the game he decided to play, I'll see later how to deal with his lie...", and she answered :
" Oh, yes, he is my husband, of course, but we are not married since long ago, so, I still have to get used to the fact that I'm a married woman now..."
They exchanged a smile and the maid helped her to drink the medicine and then, she left them alone.
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Post by siuyiu on Oct 26, 2014 21:49:39 GMT
It seems to me that all the Chinese series/movies I watched until now had also as complicated plot as mine...And I don't even talk about Jin Yong's Condor Heroes (I only finished the first part...)or Gu Long's Chu Liu Xiang... Scandalous ? They didn't even kiss (unless I forgot what I wrote previously ; sometimes, I have to read again what was written in order to avoid mistakes) !! And in the series I watched, there are also young couples reunited by fate and who travel alone and finally fall in love too...Of course, I'm not very familiar with the uses in China at that time, which explains what I wrote... You should prepare some aspirins, because more twists are to come in the plot (big smiles...I don't know how to use the smileys in this forum, sorry.) !!! i never said the plots of existing series/movies/novels don't give me headaches as well from their complicated plots.  as for the scandalous behaviour, it's an interesting dilemma: the segregation of the sexes is the norm in "ancient" china--and according to old fuddy-duddies like confucius. women stay at home and are only seen by men who are their kin or their husbands and sons (and their husbands male relatives during family gatherings). single men and women most certainly should not see each other or be seen together anywhere. however, jianghu/wulin heroes and heroines are mostly exempt from this stricture--after all, heroines can't otherwise go on adventures and kill baddies. even so, casual touching is still not deemed polite--shows a lack of breeding and proper conduct. the heroes, especially, should only touch any part of any female only when necessary and even then, they should hesitate before contact. those are the rules, anyway. in reality, touching is common--especially in adaptations because, well, it makes for better drama if the heroine throws her wailing self into the strong embrace of the hero and all that shit. but readers/viewers are still expected to go "tsk, tsk, such unseemly behaviour" and shake their heads while grinning the whole time, fully aware of their own hypocrisy. the chinese are weird, aren't they? 
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Post by reinafu on Oct 26, 2014 22:59:34 GMT
Thanks for the informations, and I hope that you didn't took bad what I said about the complicated plots...
There were also chaperones in Spain (The " duègne " in French) for young ladies a long time ago and it was difficult for the lovers to see each other, and I think that it was the same for all Mediterranean countries : women at home, men at work and no one can even look at a girl without her father's permission...And there are countries where women are still submitted to these rules now (see what happens in some countries these times...but I don't want to discuss politics or religions, it's too sensible and might generate conflicts...).
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